Firstly, great job Martin! I love the intro portion. I feel a bit of Mahler in the way you build. I'm not incredibly sure about the transition at 1:51. Definently more 20th century, which I was sad about, but I do not know what you were going for. It hear a bit of Stravinslky influence maybe? Thank you for getting back to something a little more intement at 3:20 haha! The transition to the waltz at 4:20 is fantastic and very fitting!
Thanks for sharing Robo! This is a fantastic piece. I give you a 9/10 because Beethoven wasn't making 10s at your age, and because I am excited to see how you develop with your music haha! Just do me a favor, and don't abandon tonality one day haha! If it wasn't a good thing, then it wouldn't be so popular (aka pop music)! Once again, thanks for sharing and good luck!
Ps. You should check out my classical pieces sometime. I would enjoy your critiques. I don't have the mind or time to write with true classical complexity like you do, so I stick with more of a Pops feel.